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*AddicTed*

18 Oct

she talks/
I listen/
cool soulful vibes/
I’ve almost bcome addicted/
stress sinks into oblivion as this heavenly sent soul/
swiftly lets soothin words slide thru/
her small smooth lips…/
Fatigue smoothered instantly/
mind magically shifts 4rm millitary drill to/
toddler ease…/

Ma life is a honeymoon wheneva I
hear her speak/

She talks/
I listen/
I’ve bcome/
addicted//

uThanDiLe©2013

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6 Comments

Posted by on October 18, 2013 in Uncategorized

 

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6 responses to “*AddicTed*

  1. brian miller

    October 23, 2013 at 12:43 pm

    my life is a honeymoon when i hear her speak
    dang. you should get major points for that one.
    nice

     
    • frikalture

      October 24, 2013 at 9:38 am

      hehehe. thanx brian. much appreciated.

       
  2. shanyns

    October 23, 2013 at 1:38 pm

    Very very nice. Love the cadence here, and yes the honeymoon line totally rocks!

     
    • frikalture

      October 24, 2013 at 9:39 am

      thanx. I think ima be using that line frequently 😉

       
  3. Gay Reiser Cannon

    October 23, 2013 at 7:37 pm

    I love the rhythm of your poems, and your honey sounding words. Lovely.

     
    • frikalture

      October 24, 2013 at 9:41 am

      ‘honey soundin words’…..salute 4 that big up!
      thanx.

       

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